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The best night ever

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It has been a first week back in school and max was, again, trying to impress Roxanne, with the help of his friends Bobby and PJ. "Hey look max, Roxanne is walking by herself, time to make your move" pj said as he pushed Max towards her.

Max looked at his friends and to her as Roxanne saw Max and smiled happily. Why is she so happy? "Max, guess what?, there's some news that a senior prom is starting next week and I already figured out on who to take" she rambled on excitedly. A prom? Next week? Max was so excited now, he can't wait to tell her how he feels. He nervously smiled at her.

"Well, th-that's good, Roxanne, anyone- in p-particular" he stuttered nervously, making Roxanne giggle. He smiled at her. "Yep, remember chad? Yeah, he asked me to the prom. Isn't that exciting?" Max could've sworn his heart broke into two at what he got told by the girl of his dreams Looks like his girl doesn't like him like that.

He tried to put on a happy face. Roxanne noticed and got concerned. "Max? Are you okay?" Max looked up and smiled reassuringly. "Of course, I'm fine, congratulations, I hope you can be happy together" he faked smiled but deep inside he was broken. He hopes she didn't notice.

...

"Oh c'mon Maxie, eat your dinner, you haven't eaten since you back from school " Goofy stated worriedly. He was worried about his son since he never see Him heartbroken. Max looked up and sighed. "I'm sorry dad, it's just, Roxanne chose chad over me, CHAD, the one who cheats on girls for looks."

goofy sadly smiled and patted his shoulder and got max to look at him. "C'mon son, it's not the end of the world. I'm pretty sure Roxanne didn't mean to hurt you. I mean she likes you doesn't she? and Besides, prom isn't just about couples dancing. Have fun with your friends" max looked at him in shock.

His father may have embarrassed him a lot, and annoys him, but sometimes Goofy knew exactly what to say in Max's time of need. He was right.

"Your right dad, I'm gonna have fun at the prom." Max smiled. Goofy was happy he made him smile. He a-yuked again. Max shook his head. Typical Goofy.

...

It was the week of the prom and everyone got ready as it started. Max was wearing his tuxedo and combs his hair, although it remained the same, he realised it doesn't matter. His dad smiled with tears in his eyes."Maxie, you made your daddy proud" he hugged max tightly, choking him in the process.

"Uh dad, ch-choking me" Max choked, making goofy broke his hug. He got in the car as Goofy drove to the senior prom. As they got there, Max hopped out of the car and noticed his friends there. He thanked goofy as he drove back home, leaving max walking up to his friends.

"Hey, there's max-umilli-on" Bobby slurred happily as PJ said  hello to him. "Hey guys, are you ready for the night of your life?" Max asked them.

"Yeah bro, Stacey is at the girls area, waiting for yours truly" Bobby remarked as he looked at the mirror, admiring his looks. Max chuckled at that. "Guys, look. There's Roxanne." Max heard pj say and was shocked at what he wore a blue dress with pearls around them and wore ear rings and her hair was Long and has a flower on it. She looked so beautiful. He would do anything to be with her, but he knew that appearances don't matter.
It's the heart and soul of the person, and Roxanne was the perfect example of that.

He would've stared at her for a long time, if it wasn't for his friends. "Huh, oh, sorry guys. Man look at Roxanne, she looks...stunning" max couldn't describe the word for Roxanne. But he remembered she was going with chad. He sighed as he went inside the prom.

He sat with his friends as it started. Principle Mazur came on stage, leaving everyone with a bored expression. he began to speak. "Well, looks like it was going well. Good evening everyone, before we start on this tremendous occasion, let me tell you the history-"

"Less talking more action" one of the students interrupted him. The whole school agreed as principle mazer grumbled something under his breath. "Alright everyone, since my "talking" bores you out. Let's start on it" everyone, for once, cheered as they got ready for the dance.

Max decided to see Roxanne one last time before she goes dancing with chad. She noticed him and smiled warmly, making Max blush. "Oh hey Max, good to see you. Listen I hope your not mad at me for choosing chad. I hope you didn't get too upset" max puts a finger on her lips, shushing her.

He smiled goofily. "U-um, you-you look,bea-beautiful, Roxanne" Max stuttered shyly, making Roxanne giggle. She gave him a warm smile before hugging him, causing him to smile goofily.

She chuckled at his brightened face. "Yo, Roxy, over here, i meed to speak to you" chad called to her, making Max disappointed that he has to let Roxanne go. Before she left, he took  her hands. "Roxanne, I just hope you know that...I'm here for you...if you-you need me" he said genuinely.

She smiled and pecked him on the cheek. He went all shy as he saw her going to chad. Max prayed she would be okay with him. He went back to his friends as he saw Bobby dancing with Stacey and PJ was  with Lisa. He smiled at them as they had a wonderful time.

He sighed. If only he would've told Roxanne on time, she would've gone with him instead of chad. Suddenly, before he sat down, he heard chad and Roxanne argue on something, and couldn't help but went to overhear the conversation.

"I'm sorry Roxanne, I don't think it's working out." Chad said. Max gasped at that. Was HE breaking up with HIS girl? He heard Roxanne cry. "Please chad, I thought you liked me" chad scoffed. "Yeah right, I thought I did until you talked to that goof. I'm sorry but I need to find someone thats right for me" chad stated as he left Roxanne. Everyone was shocked at what they saw, but not as shocked as Max.

Roxanne started to sob as she left the school building. Max's blood boiled. How dare Chad breaking up with Roxanne. If he was chad, he would've loved her forever. He felt a tap on his shoulder and noticed PJ. "Go on Max, go after her. She needs you" max nodded at him and tried to find Roxanne.

He looked outside everywhere until he heard her crying in the gym. He opened the gym door and noticed she threw the flowers on the ground and sobbed her heart out. Max's heart broke at this. Poor Roxanne. Max went to her and tapped her shoulder and she gasped and looked at max. She was shocked he could find her here. He sat down near her and gave her a hug. Roxanne gladly accepted it and continued to cry.

He didn't care that his tuxedo was wet, he just cared if she was alright. They stayed like that until she calmed down a bit to speak. "Chad br-broke up with me" she whimpered. Max nodded solemnly as he gave her another hug, "he's an idiot. He doesn't deserve to be with you" he reassured her gently as he dried her tears. She smiled through her tears as she calmed down before she spoke again.

"I know but, maybe I'm just trying too hard to find the right guy, maybe I should just quit, while I'm ahead. Love hurts way too much" she began to cry again but max didn't give up. He placed her face in his hands as he made her look up to him. "No,never give up on love. You are a beautiful girl inside and out and your the sweetest girl I know.  Heh, I know it's cheesy but it's the truth. And there is another guy out there waiting for you." Max reassured her then hugged her again. 'and that guy is me' he thought, smiling as he felt her getting closer to him.

Roxanne smiled as she hugged him as well.. They stayed like that for a long time. Roxanne sighed. "I'm sorry I ruined your night max" max looked at her in shock. Why was she apologising about tonight? He took her hands and held them tightly. "No, don't apologise, you didn't ruin my night, in fact, you made it even better. Just sitting here and comforting you, makes me feel warm inside, and there's also one more thing to ask you" max smiled warmly at her as she did the same.

He stood up and helped her up. He took her hands in his and he took a deep breath. "Roxanne...will you be my prom date?" Max asked her warmly. Roxanne looked shocked. He was being such a gentlemen tonight and she didn't notice. She doesn't deserve to have someone as nice as him. But she couldn't say no to him, even if she tried. She took his hands and said yes.

Max never felt this happy in years, but today, it was just the start. He noticed it was too noisy in the party so he decided to have a dance in the gym. Roxanne thought outside would be more romantic for them and they did. He took her hands and walked outside. The stars looked beautiful, perfect.

Max took her hand and put his other hand on her waist as they both began to dance slowly together. Roxanne laid her head on his shoulder as he kissed her on the head. He looked at her with such admiration. Who would reject her? He may never know, but for now they kept on dancing and swaying back and forth to the music they sang together.

"its like catching lightning, the chances of finding someone like you,
Its one in a million, the chances of feeling
the way we do, and with every step together,
will just keep on getting better,
so can I have this dance?
Can I have this dance"

When they finished singing, Roxanne decided to tell him her honest truth about him. Max listened to her quietly as she spoke.  "Max...ever since I met you, I felt something inside my stomach, I thought I was nervous on meeting another boy who was hot, but I realised, looks don't matter. It's the heart and personality of a person that counts. I guess what I'm trying to say is...I love you. Max, I really really love you. I wished I would've realised sooner but chad asked me before,I got the chance."

Max looked at her smiling and spoke his own truth to her. "Roxanne, I know I haven't been much of a friend to you, but I promise you I will always be there for you whenever you need someone. If you need a shoulder to cry on, I'll be that someone. If you need a hug, I'll be there for you to lean on. Sheesh, listen to me rambling on, but I'm saying the truth. And I-i really love you too" max said genuinely to her as they hugged in the Rain, and finally looking at each others eyes and they leaned into each other and kissed passionately.

To Roxanne, the kiss felt magical, and too max, the kiss felt like a dream come true. He realised that they were soaking them as they hugged close together. Looks like they were really meant to be. He didn't care if the rain got him, All that matters is that he finally told his true feelings to Roxanne and she accepted them back. He is officially now a one happy goof.

Max smiled as he saw her looking at the stars then she looked back at him, smiling warmly at him. Max was finally happy.

he finally got the girl of his dreams and she returned her feelings towards him... And his dad was right.

.....This  has got to be the best night ever....
I thought of writing a max/Roxanne fanfic because they are cute together. 
I also written this on fanfiction as well. 

Its the time of the prom and max wants to ask Roxanne to be his prom date.
But she was taken by someone else. Will he get her before its too late or will his heart be broken?


Goofy movie characters (c) Disney 
story (c) me
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